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Cover Judge 1 Review: Blurb/Genre Rep: 10/10 Legibility: 9/10 Color Comp.: 10/10 Balance Comp.: 9/10 Overall Impression: 9/10 Total: 47/50 I love this cover at first glance. The concept fits well with the blurb and intended genre, and it looks like an interesting read. I do think the white font for the title is a little harsh because we have a lot of greens happening, so maybe a more neutral color would work better. But I really like this cover!
Judge 2 Review: Blurb/Genre Rep: 10/10 Legibility: 9.5/10 Color Comp.: 9.5/10 Balance Comp.: 10/10 Overall Impression: 9.8/10 Total: 48.8/50 Two things: make the author's name bigger or more easily read and lighten the boy a little. He seems too dark around the edges. Can you extend the light of the lamp, maybe? Other than those, this is a great cover.
Blurb Judge 3 Review: Main Character: 7/10 World: 7/10 Conflict: 7/10 Stakes: 7/10 Enticement: 7/10 Total: 35/50 This is a good start, but I find it to be a bit too vague and ambiguous. The conflict and originality of the story aren't clear to me from just this blurb.
Judge 4 Review: Main Character: 7/10 World: 8/10 Conflict: 6/10 Stakes: 6/10 Enticement: 6/10 Total: 33/50 This blurb needs some more details on the conflict and stakes. There are also some award sentences and grammar mistakes that need to be fixed.
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