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If you are trying to read the edited version remove the story from your library and then add it again.

You'll know you're reading the unedited version because when you're reading the story it sounds like reading you're someone's unedited first story and not like you've been reading a book by someone with writing experience.

In the edited version I've put way more detail and the story is more clear when I describe what's happening. But of you like the story the way it is continue to read but personally I think the new is easy better.

Thank you,
Abby ❤

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