3-Staridiot is a good 'fihgter'

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Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln

thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1

[...I refuse to dignify that with a response]

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StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. [YOU JUST BECAME AN APPRENTICE! You can't go on patrol alone!]

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 [It was so important that the author had to use exclamation points and ones]

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. [wat]

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" [Yes, and Sandstorm would claw your ears off if she heard that]

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. [No duh, Staridiot]

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thnkx and ples no more flams [wtf are flams]

Oh wait, and I should probably add that the actual chapter titles of this book are not the chapter titles of the original book. They are my interpretations of the chapters XD

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