Reviews and Ranks

Cait.

Author: Roxanne_Snow
Book: Cait.

The Flow:
The only reason I was hooked instantly, and actually read and enjoyed this book, is because of the first chapter. Which is the most important part of your story. I love quotes. Especially those that plunge into my reality. The theme 'numbness' is described through her thought process - it takes skill to transfer the reader into the mind of the character, and not give too much away. You have spelling, punctuation and grammatical mistakes which can easily be reviewed and edited. But it hasn't disrupted my ability to read which is a really good sign!

Characters who resonated with me:
Cait: I love how you've taken us through this journey of seeking herself. Her state of mind, the way she perceives the world. It's amazing how you've still maintained a sense of mystery throughout every chapter. It's clear that she doesn't need the 'sympathetic treatment' from her family, she just wants to be understood, she wants to be found. I can relate to her character so well because it isn't about being loved or acknowledged, it's about knowing you, loving you. Great job with demonstrating good characterization, you've clearly outlined how Cait is inside-out.
Constructive criticism: The last few chapters, the theme is gradually subsiding. It's disappearing. Feeling numb isn't just about going with the flow of things, it's about being trapped, the struggle to emancipate. I'm telling you, your book has potential, but the overarching theme needs to be consistently reinforced. The story line is there, but I need to feel that build up of events, the rising action that leads to the climax.

Rank: 6 1/2 /10 - Trust me, if you work on your story line and the main theme, I'll even change this. I say this because based on your writing style, you are capable of perfecting your book! Don't lose hope!