Author: indianastilinski
Book: Domino's
The Flow + Characters:
So - like I said in the form, if I'm not interested in your book, I'll stop reading. I honestly wasn't interested in the conversations, they were really cliche and too exaggerated. And Audrey was screaming most of the time (caps lock) it just didn't feel real to me. I like a sense of meaning when I read a book, especially storyline wise. I felt like there was one, but the first two chapters didn't grip me. They were dramatic. Although your writing skills are good and you have a really nice sense of humour (you should dim on the exaggerations a notch!). I liked Blake, the fact that he's blunt and outspoken, even though I'm not too fond of swearing, it suited his character. Anyways I'm sure a lot of readers out there have enjoyed this book and I'm sorry nonetheless, I'm just being honest and giving you my point of view (:
Rating - 5
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RandomI feel like giving constructive criticism. I did this before and then deleted it. Whoever manages to find this, well you're in for an honest but a simple-straight-to-the-point review plus a ranking out of 10 :) ! P.s Votes are given for every chapt...
