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what are your thoughts on the plot development of this book? be as brutal as possible. don't say anything to please me. give me your honest opinion. personally, I think it developed okay-ish but very slowly and its losing pace now, I've just been thinking about this for the last few days.

Sitting in the living room, I heard the room door open and Harry walked out in only his tightly fit boxers, my eyes immediately narrowed on his ass. He headed to the kitchen and I watched the way his back muscles rippled as he moved. It's been two weeks since I lost my mom and I've managed to stand on my feet again. Losing her was rough, the hardest thing I had to ever go through, the kind of pain that no one wants to feel yet it's inevitable. I guess, I owe that credit to Harry, I've visited my father over the last two weeks but I couldn't bring myself to stay in that house even though I'm always away in my dorm and only go home for the holidays, I just can't. My father hadn't pressured me to stay with him and I'm glad he didn't. Plus I've grown accustomed to waking up to the sound of Harry snoring, I chuckled to myself at the thought of that.

"Hey" Harry greeted softly as I stepped up behind him, wrapping my arms around his waist while he put his rings on. I hummed and leaned my cheek against his back, now covered by his shirt. His hand grasped mine, bringing it up to his lips as he kissed my knuckles, "You okay?" I nodded "I'm fine, I just wanted to hold you" Harry twisted his arms to wrap around me, his hands slipping into my back pockets and I tigehtend my hold on him. "Babe?" Harry questioned when I began undoing his belt "Hmm?" I bit my lip "What are you doing?" His hands squeezed my ass causing me to squeak in response "Nothing" I sing-songed and used one hand to palm him through his jeans, while the other got his belt off, feeling his cock beneath my hand. I pulled down his zip, smiling to myself at the way Harry's body was like putty in my arms. He was completely vulnerable, I slipped my hand inside his boxers and wrapped it around his pulsing cock, feeling his erection grow within each minute.

"Okay, what's gotten into you?" Harry pushed my hand away, turning around to face me "Not your dick, which it should be" I deadpanned and he raised an eyebrow, amusement danced in his eyes "What do you want, sweetheart?" Harry lowered his voice and I felt a shiver run down my spine, his erection poked into my abdomen and I licked my lips "I want you to fuck me. I've been a horny mess the entire week and you parading around naked doesn't help either. So I want you to fuck me as hard as you can, whip me or tie me up, I don't care how you have your way with me" I blatantly added and shocked myself in the process. Harry's lips stretched into a delighted smirk, the lust evident in his eyes "As you wish" He ripped off my top and I gasped "I didn't like that top very much" He shrugged and unclipped my bra, taking one breast into his mouth and sucking on the nipple, biting it with his teeth and I moaned softly. He crouched as he pulled my underwear down my thighs, his lips came into contact with my clit.

I gasped and instinctively grabbed onto his hair, he flicked the nub with his tongue in a teasing manner before standing to his height. "You don't care what I do to you?" He asked as if in clarification and I nodded "I don't" My voice came out raspy from the little contact Harry's mouth made with my body. My skin felt as if it was on fire, every nerve tingled with sexual frustration, confusing and shocking me in the process. For the last week, every moment I spent with Harry had ended with me resisting the urge to pounce on him. He could have been playing with his hair and I would start picturing his hands stretching me out, curling against my walls until the bed was soaked in my cum. I've never felt like this before. "Great" Harry grabbed my waist and flung me to the bed, my body and breasts bouncing in reaction. I watched him from between my spread legs as he stood at the edge of the bed, jeans ridden off and he reached for his belt that lied on the floor.

My breathing quickened with anticipation of what he would do next, the way his tongue darted out to lick his lips had increased the heat between my legs. He neared me and trailed his fingers up my thighs, ghosting them over my dripping folds and I shuddered in response. "I swear if you don't fuck me right now, I'm taking this vagina and walking out that front door" Harry let out a dark chuckle at my words, his head tilting back "You and this vagina is going nowhere, sweetheart. I thought I made myself clear on that" Harry's intense gaze met mine and I felt my stomach shiver "On your knees, baby, I want that ass in the air" I did as he said, turning over on the bed and perched myself on my knees. Harry placed a hand to the small of my back and I resisted grinding my ass against his hard cock that pressed to my body. Gently, he added pressure to his hand and my torso bent forward, my cheek resting flat on the bed as he reached for my wrists and twisted my hands behind my back.

Harry's actions had liquid spilling from my folds, down my abdomen and thighs. I whimpered as I felt leather tighten around my wrists, Harry's hands pushed forward on my thighs and spread them further apart before he nestled himself between them. "Harry, please" I panted and felt Harry brush the tip of his cock along my entrance and up to my buttcheeks, I groaned in response. He didn't say a word except for grabbing my hips, to hold me in place, before he slammed into me which caused the wind to be knocked out of my lungs. "Fuck!" I screamed in pleasure at the slight stinging sensation of Harry entering me, raw and thick, my hands clawed at the belt around my wrists. "Tell me if I should stop" He rasped and I shook my head, wanting him to continue. My back arched as he slowly pulled out, I could feel a rush of air against my now gaping hole before Harry eased back into me. I let out a moan, squeezing my buttcheeks around Harry's cock "Relax, sweetheart" He started thrusting and my eyes rolled upward in euphoria.

He increased his pace, a groan leaving his lips and his grip on my hips tightened. "Just like that, Harry. Fuck, that feels so good" I screamed shakily, moans spilling from the base of my throat as Harry brutally fucked my ass. I met his pace, circling my hips against his, as much as I could from having my hands tied up behind me. "I'm so fucking close" He grunted and I whimpered in response, feeling my clit tingle with delight while the pit in my stomach grew, my hands fisted around the belt. "Shit! I'm gonna cum" I moaned loudly as Harry wrapped a hand behind my neck, lifting my torso up to give him more leverage. My breathing was labored and his thrusts became harder, the sound of his balls slapping against the back of my thighs filled the room along with our heavy breathing and obscene moaning as I felt Harry's cock slip deeper inside me.

I could feel his tip twitch against the walls of my ass, growing thicker with each second as he stretched me out completely. Ribbons of liquid shot out of his hardened length, filling me with cum when Harry orgasmed. His lips came into contact with my neck and my own cum dripped down my thighs, coating Harry's thick cock and the bed below us. "Oh my God, that was amazing" I panted and Harry trailed kisses up my shoulder and to my cheek while he untied my hands. "You're amazing" Harry corrected and pulled out of me, I could feel my hole pulsate with ease, leaving a burning yet pleasurable sensation in its wake. I fell onto the bed with my knees bent, Harry collapsed next to me and I watched his cum drip out of my ass. I collected the liquid with my fingers, trailing it up my entrance and to my sensitive clit. Gently, I moved my fingers in circles and threw my head back from the pleasure release.

I moaned softly before slipping two fingers inside me, still covered in Harry's cum and I knew he was watching me. I whined when he harshly pushed my hand away for the second time only to squeal loudly as he groped my thighs and pulled my body over him. "Don't think you're going to masturbate in front of me and expect me to just watch" He looked up at me through hooded eyes and I smirked "That was the whole idea, baby" Harry adjusted my body so I now straddled his face, my soaking entrance in line with his mouth and I mewled as he used his fingers to pull my folds apart before darting his tongue inside me. "Harry" I simpered and clutched onto the headboard, now happy at having my hands free. His tongue slipped out of me, trailing down to between my ass, and I gasped when he teased my hole with the tip of his tongue. I rolled my hips in response, "Fuck sakes, Harry" I moaned, holding onto the headboard with all my strength as my legs had turned into jelly on either side of Harry's head.

He flicked my clit with his thumb and slipped his sinful tongue back inside me, lapping it against my walls and I moved in circles, riding his tongue like my life depended on it. The vibration of Harry moaning against me sent shivers down my spine and my toes curled. I let out a scream as I orgasmed a few minutes later, I glanced down to Harry watching as he swallowed my cum, cleaning me up with his tongue and fingers. "You taste so fucking good, Addy" He moaned and I caught my breath, my whole body was flushed and I collapsed in a sweaty mess next to him. "I'm so glad we did this again" I turned on my side and Harry copied "What? Anal?" I nodded while leaning over and taking his lips in mine "So am I" He smirked before pulling my body closer to his and the covers over us.

thoughts on this chapter????

so my aunt passed on Sunday morning, I won't be able to update as often for the next few weeks but I will try and write a little so the chapters build up. I really appreciate your patience <3. I'm gonna write more for this book so it will finish rather quickly then I'll concentrate on poetic Polaroids as that's almost done as well.

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