Y/n Reinousha is a pro hero, who's been suddenly offered a teaching position at UA high and accepts(with all might). She finds Shota Aizawa happens to work at UA as well on her first day as a teacher. It's been years since they last saw each other a...
Hello beautiful readers. I'm currently working on the next chapter of the story! I'm very excited but want to get your opinions on a part that I started writing. It doesn't have to be included but it can. It's a bit more on the triggering and somewhat abusive side. I'm actually thinking about editing it out because of how negative it is. I don't condone abusive behavior towards anyone especially a loved one or significant other. I've personally been in a few not so great moments where things got out of hand and a person has been violent towards me. But at the same time I kinda wanna get reader's (y/n) feelings across to our lovely sleepy boi.
Anyways I've included a screen grab of what I had written. Also I know it's a bit confusing that it says her pov only to see a descriptive action in a different person's point of view. I actually did that by accident because I'm writing two versions of the same chapter at the same time. I'm learning from my past chapters that i've written in both view points. I had a difficult time last time since I had wrote them at separate times and had to keep going and referencing back to the original and my notes instead of opening two windows and letting it flow onto each sheet side by side.
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I know there are plenty of other ways to call Shota out on all his bull shit, but for one reason or another this one feels very natural. Honestly may be that I'm still dealing with past stuff myself but I wanted to bring up a few of our character's past as well in the chapter. I'm still working out the kinks of the chapter. I want y/n to be a kinda sassy, sarcastic, soft girl that is a undercover badass and isn't afraid to show it when she wants. I also wanna have an organic sort of way for y/n and shota's underlying tensions and past be aired out so that their romance and love for each other can bloom.
Okay so I said what I wanted for the most part. I might just scrap the intense violent outburst or at least minimize it. I may also delete this "chapter/part" later on. It was mostly for you to see my writing process (this indecisiveness is the reason my chapters have a wide gap between them in upload times).
