Sorry its a slow start...i want it to be as real as can be...and in real life there is more going on than boy meets girls, etc. and im sure i will add more little details to past chapters as i go.
I really cant wait until melody and riley get closer...not sure what will push them past the new friend zone yet...probably why I havent written it yet...for melody its easy but riley struggles with it more...bro-code!
I also want to develop Zoe’s character, she comes off more valley-girl than i picture her. And also Landon is a truly loving brother...need to bring the hidden softer side out more.
Thank you for reading my work in progress...pls like and comment! I want to know what you think of the awkward relationship blossoming between Melody and Riley!
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His Forbidden Sweets (Complete)
RomanceMelody just graduated high school and her best friend left for the summer. Bored with no one to talk to she logs in online. She enters a chat room to find someone she can vent to about the stress of deciding on a college. Riley is once again staying...
