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Nightsong

This Oc belongs to HopefulstarTC

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Name: Nightsong
Nice name

Past Names: Nightpaw; Nightkit
Alright

Name Reason: Night for his mainly black pelt, and song die to his Mainly Calm nature
Interesting, I've never seen -Song used for calmness before

Appearance: A slim, well-muscled Black tom With a White underbelly and tail tips and emerald-green eyes
Nice base but he needs a much bigger description

Gender: Male
👌

Age: 27 moons
Semi young 🙃

Personality: Calm and quiet tom who is good at listening, however her has haunting sin his mind and doubts. He can also be seen a semi-gullible
"Haunting sin" Whoah, okay. Like what, he has to constantly restrain himself from mass murdering or being a serial rapist?
Also more traits and explanation in the personality

Clan: ShadowClan/No Clan/StarClan
Alright

Rank: Rouge/StarClan member
I would add in Warrior to avoid confusion

Kin: Sky (Biological Mother): A slim and lite black she-cat with a white underbelly and tail tip and dark blue eyes.
Pretty~

Also I'm too lazy to say it more than once so all the cats need better descriptions unless said otherwise

Multi (Biological father): A broad-shouldered and well-muscled orange spotted tabby with emerald-green red and scars crossed across his pelt.
Multi is a super odd name. I don't really have any opinion about his appearance

Changed (Biological sister): A broad-shouldered and lithe orange spotted tabby with dark blue eyes.
Changed is also a very strange name. But she makes sense with the parents

Jackalpelt (Adopted Mother): A lithe dark brown she-cat with black spots and green eyes.
I like her base <3 She reminds me of Leopardfoot a bit

Toadeye (Adopted Father): A semi-plump and broad-shouldered Dark gray tom with toad-green eyes.
Cute

Crowtalon (Adopted Sister): A lithe Black She-cat With dark blue eyes.
Mkay

Sprucepelt (Adopted Brother): Dark brown tom with green eyes
Nice

Mate: Hopefulstar: A slim and lithe brown she-cat with green legs and yellow eye
Uh, interesting name...? Also I'm going to assume you meant green and yellow EYES

Kits: Darkbite: A broad-shouldered And well-muscled brown tom with a white underbelly and tail tip and green eyes.
Again interesting name. His appearance isn't bad though

Midnightclaw: A broad-shouldered and lithe Black tom With a White underbelly and tail tip and yellow eyes.
This one feels kind of meh for me. His appearance and name are very boring and overused

Friendlystar: A slim and lithe Black She-cat with a dark brown underbelly and tail tip and green legs, yellow eyes.
Ehhh black cats with brown under bellies are kind of off limits because of Spiderleg being the only cat in the series to look like that. And again the grammar mistake of "green legs" I hope to god that was supposed to say eyes. Also her name is super dumb, and I guess she became leader after her mother?

Mentor: Darkstar: a well-muscled and slim Black She-cat with amber eyes.
ok

Apprentice: Shadedpelt: A slim and lithe dark gray she-cat with a white-spotted pelt and green eyes.
Alright