Not an update...

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6/23/2022

Hello! I apologize for this but I want to ask some people who want to read a draft for the current chapter of my reaction fic. I'm quite stuck there as much as I want to update. 

I want to ask for your opinion on how I'll proceed on that draft or if you think that I made a wrong turn there, I would like to receive your opinions.

Message me your email, then I'll send the link for you or if you're okay with reading a 2000 words in message box, then comment or message me and I'll send it. I really appreciate if you're interested to help me.


Well, I have something special at least in my opinion. The traditional drawing I made below of the chapter, I made it to a digital colored. I hope you comment your thoughts here and planning to post it later to Reddit if well perceived here.

SCENARIO:

Kanzaki: "Ichinose, Ayanokouji is dangerous!"

Ichinose: "..."

Kanzaki: "Ayanokouji's our enemy, Ichinose!"

Ichinose: "..."

Kanzaki: "We should made sacrifices, Ichinose. We can't continue it like this."

Ichinose: "..."

Kanzaki: "Staying like this, we'll just be demoted to Class D. "

Ichinose: "..."

Kanzaki: "Ichinose!"

Kanzaki: "Ichinose!"

Kanzaki: "Ichinose!"

Ichinose's pissed now.
Ichinose: "You know quite something, Kanzaki-kun, huh?"

Ichinose: "Well, go lead the class then."

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Which of it is better? HAHAHHAHA Comment your thoughts here!

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And one more thing, well, I think there's a few who think that Kanzaki should take over the leadership of Class B. I see the reasons for it as (I've only read until y2v3) Ichinose's leadership/actions didn't bring results as much as the other's progress and currently fallen down to Class D, am I right?

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