Constructive criticism is a helpful way of giving feedback that provides specific, actionable suggestions. Rather than providing general advice, constructive criticism gives specific recommendations on how to make positive improvements. Constructive criticism is clear, to the point, and easy to put into action. Some might want more general things, like is it interesting and others, much more detailed IF the reader is so inclined.
@BlameSaiki - Would like to know if the story is enjoyable and if the reader would like to go deeper. If not, what turns people away? What is the story missing?
@RogueWriter55 - Would like to know if the story is interesting, clear, concise. PLEASE, point out any typos or parts that sound like an IKEA manual written in Swedish. (Translation: it's not clear)
@DelaneyBrenna - Would like her partner to keep an eye out for repetition with information/descriptors.
@KitCatK8 - Requests the full package. Is the writing enjoyable, clear, and concise? Are they grammatical errors or typos? Does the story cause any type of emotional reaction? Opinions are welcome on what would make the story better.
@PVChan01- Wants gentle, kind, feedback on areas that can be improved upon. Just a general idea of how it reads, building, is the plot interesting, characters engaging and does it make you want to read more.
@juliecotewriter - Would love any kind of feedback/editing with an eye toward feedback on the worldbuilding. Mainly things in the genre of, does it make sense and feel realistic, or are there places that should be explained more, or things that seem to contradict.
PAIRINGS
Week 2 - Due Sunday, March 27, 2022
📗 Remember to comment 'done', 'finished', 'wow', etc. by your group when done.
📘Minimum is two chapters, four inline comments, and a few lines at the end of the second chapter on what you thought, impressions, etc.
BlameSaiki [Sins of a Blood Knight] - PVChan01 [The Wild Card's Queen]
juliecotewriter [Wanderlust] - KitCatK8 [Fallen's First - google doc]
RogueWriter55 [The Clearing] - DelaneyBrenna [The Golden Arrow]
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Sugarbabes Round Robin Reading Group [Closed Group]
General FictionWelcome to the Round Robin Reading Group, hosted by the Sugarbabes! 🌹The requirements may seem light, but we hope the substance is heavy🌹 In tournaments and such, round-robin scheduling arranges to have all players take turns playing each other...
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