His Experiment [FIRST EDIT]

Update!

Okay, so the story has FINALLY been polished and shine thanks to the amazing DanaScully, who's the editor as you can see on the blurb :)

Basically, for those of you who don't want to go back and re-read, there weren't any drastic changes. However, I suggest you do go back and skim over the chapters. New scenes and flashbacks were added in to help lengthen the chapters and add a little more depth into the story.

I forgot, but someone reminded me. there is one major change in chapter one that affects the rest of the book. Instead of abusing her, He tortures her. I felt the need to change it and I feel it fits in a little better.

If something in the chapters that follow doesn't make sense, comment on that chapter and if it dealt with a new scene then I'll tell you which chapter it was in and where.

Along with new scenes, chapters were merged together. Instead of the 19 it used to have, I think there's 17 altogether, including the newest chapter which is on the next part. Some of the chapters were a little too short and could fit together.

Okay, I really think that's it...so continue on :) The latest chapter is there, but you won't get an update or anything for it.