Oc Reviews

Spencer Hallens [Soul Eater Oc]

Name: Spencer (or spence to Saige Myer, another oc) Hallens

Species: human/miester

Yes, a human oc. Too many witch ocs ffs

Abilities: strong, quick thinker, creative, good observer

He fits the position of a miester well XD

Age: a year older than the canon guys (tee hee. Like that Author-san. ^w^)

Personality: tough, stick in the mud, party pooper (saige makes him to hav fun), serious most of the time, mysterious, caring, sometimes a joker

Personality makes sense ;u;

Family; dad-killed, mom-killed,
little sis (bethany)- murdered

Whole entire family is dead ;_-;
Weapon: Saige Myer (an oc)

Friends: Saige is his bff. (Shes can make him smile most of the time) doesn't like the canon characters as much as saige but she forced him to be friends so he got a bit close to the guys.

Past: he has never told anybody about his past not even saige. (But ill tell u. He never wanted to be a meister bc of the fighting and everything until there was one day that a witch (to put a twist that witch was Saige's mother but he doesnt know. Muehehe) attacked his hometown and kill everyone except him so that day forward he swore to kill every witch and kishin that ever walked on earth. So he applied to the academy. He was cold hearted to everyone until he accidentally met Saige in the funeral for her sister. Spencer knew the pain of losing a sister so he was nice to her. Later on saige became his weapon and bff which made him soft at least)

Eh... Out of all people I don't see why they would leave some teen alive xD

looks: he has black hair and green eyes. Fair skin and nice abs and also hes taller than saige

Natural looking. Good, good.

Also ps he has a small crush on saige (getting bigger every day but hes good when hiding emotions also. Hes not the jealous type when saige hangs around with dudes but if anyone hurts her.... they just signed their death sentence)

Overall:

This oc has great potential XD

He personality and abilities collide well together.

However, some things aren't the most.. Original. The fact that he was the only one left alive, and his parents and sister dies made it a bit Gary Stu-ish. I would make it to where his parents are left alive, but his sisters death seems like a major part of this oc so I'd keep her dead. And I think a small group of people should have found a hiding place, and survived, having Spencer and his parents among them.

90% original

10% changeable