Oc Reviews

SharpShooter [Creepypasta Oc]

Name: SharpShooter

Original Name: Felicity Lockett

Parents: Alive, Worried about there 'Missing' daughter

YESSS, FINALLY.

Has anyone noticed that most creepypasta ocs have dead parents. And then if their parents are alive they don't even give a frick about their child, classic invisible parents.

Personality: Very jealous introverted girl who can only trust the people no one trusts (No one trusts her)

Likes: Bow and Arrows, Manga, Her family, and writing

Dislikes: Summertime. She hates it because where she lives, it gets SUPER humid (Houston, TX). And dislikes Ebony Moonlit, someone who she thought was nice but was a backstabbing bully.

Age: 26

#NOMORETEENS :^)

Relationships: None

Yesssss

Appearance: White Hair, Gray and White scarf, Black skirt with fair pink leggings, Lots of bangs, some hair held back with a bow (different color everyday), strapped black shirt that flows over her shoulders, dark green bow and arrow strap, and her necklace with a lock on it.

But how does she have white hair? Albinoism?? Confuzzled.

Backstory: (SUPER LONG!!) She surprisingly loved children (Like a motherly love) so when summertime (the dreaded summertime NOOO!!) came around, she volunteered to be a camp counselor at camp Shoot-A-Bow.

Makes sense

She always did love archery and the camp taught kids to shoot a bow and believe in there skills. She was teaching this kid, Andrea LaBianca, to hit the target. Andrea never could get it right. Felicity taught her everyday and one day, she finally hit the bullseye.

Felicity was so happy for Andrea. As a present she was going to go get her some ice cream. To her surprise, Ebony Moonlit (Her worst enemy), was standing behind her with a smirk on her face. "I can do WAYY better than that BRAT!!" Ebony screeched (*covers ears* Ow!!) as she aimed for the target. Then, Ebony 'slipped' and pointed the bow at Felicity and let go.

RIP

Jk jk I'm so mean;-;

The arrow stabbed her right in the eye (Ouch!!) and Ebony laughed and said, "OOPS!! Clumsy me!! Sorry hon, want me to get you a towel?" Felicity was so shocked she ran for the woods (Don't worry it's not gonna be cliché). The eye that was stabbed by the arrow turned a lighter green than the opposite green eye. She pulled the arrow out of her eye, yelping in pain. From the angle she pulled it out, it caused a scar. She didn't want to go back, but she had an urge for revenge. Somehow, Ebony ended up in the woods. Felicity had her sights on her.

Before even thinking it over, she shot the arrow. Miss. Ebony looked around and in the mist of that, Felicity finally got her. Felicity snapped back to reality and realized that she was now a murderer. She can't go home now.

She was determined to stay in those woods. Then she had a plan. She would sneak food and water from the camp and she would stay in the woods, killing or harming the people who she thought were bad, which was almost everyone. People hated her, so she thought they were bad. She wouldn't live forever, so until it was her time to go, that's what she would do.

The story doesn't seem creepy but it actually is. If you tell it to young children with detail they'll be scared out of their wits :')

Overall:

This is a pretty good oc.

The one thing I found bad about it is the white hair thing. It would be ok if the appearance was explained but since it wasn't, it'll have to be marked as overused. That can be fixed though. I would change the hair color or find a logical medical reason or something.

But other than the unexplained hair color, I like her. Her back story seems logical and I love how her parents aren't dead or invisible. Plus her story, told a certain way, can scare some little gullible children :'))

95% original

5% changeable