Bubble Dream [MLP:FIM Oc]

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Fandom: My little pony

Name: Bubble Dream

Type: Pegasus

YES #NOMOREALICORNS

Personality: Bubbly, talkative, and artistic

Cutie Mark: A pink bubble

Job: An Artist

Favorite Season of MLP:
Season 5

Wait what

Age: 5 to 6 years old in pony years

So a filly? If so she shouldn't really have a job..

Hobbies: Drawing, Sports, and Writing

Looks: She has red hair with pink and light blue highlights, pale skin, and blue eyes

Cotton candy, that's what I thought of when I read that XD

Sex: Female

Does have human counterpart

Lives: With the Cakes and Pinkie Pie at Sugar Cube Corners

Noooo ;π; interaction with canon characters is a sin--

Plusssss~,,

It's overused

Flaws: anger issues and very sensitive

If she's bubbly I don't think she'd have anger issues--

So I'd leave that out.

Overall:

Well there wasn't really much to review, a lot of info was missing... Like for instance how did she earn her cutie mark? There's no back story so we'll never know!

And I didn't like the fact that she lives at Sugarcube Corner. Who is her family? Mother? Father?

However there were good things, just not enough information.

70% original

5% changeable

25% missing

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