Hey guys.
So far this book has garnered a lot of attention and I just want a bit of feed back.
Please leave your responses in the comments or message me or even post on my page.
1. Do you think writing this story in the 3rd person is getting across the emotions well?
2. Are the chapters a decent length. Not too long or too short?
3. Do you think the characters are being developed properly? Are they relatable and "real"?
Thanks so much for your help!
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Joshua || MxM || Lgbtq+
Romance#264 in Romance 06/02/2018 #267 in Romance 03/01/2018 #304 in Romance 07/01/2018 #455 in Romance 24/12/2017 *** Joshua Pits was a big man and that was mostly due to his job as a head mechanic at Pits Stop and Garage which he now co-owns with his old...
