NBR SPOTLIGHT ROUND 2

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COMMENTING TIME FRAME:

Monday, October 15 - Sunday, October 28, 2018, 11:59 PM (CDT)

MODERATOR: Leah_tee

COMMENT TOPIC: Scene building/world construction is the backbone of any story, but it can be difficult for writers to strike a balance. Were you transported to "that time or place"? Point out where the authors may have been under- or over-descriptive and suggest any possible improvements.

ANNOUNCEMENT: Make sure you review all 4 chapters and answer the Comment Topic for each one. Make sure your answers for the CT and author's questions are at least 6 sentences each. Also, please remember to label the comment topic and author's questions as CT, Q1, Q2, and Q3, respectively.

• Please do not read the other comments before completing your own review. (We expect there to be some overlap among the reviewers.)

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AUTHOR #1: redtoadmedia

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AUTHOR #1: redtoadmedia

Book: Sorrowfish

Genre: Fantasy

Specified Chapter: Chapter 36: Zonah

Chapter Link: https://www.wattpad.com/605002440-sorrowfish-chapter-thirty-six-zonah

Chapter Rating: PG

Chapter Rating: PG

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