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AUTHOR #1: JMills_
Book: Psychosis
Genre: Horror
Specified Chapter: Chapter 4
Chapter Link: https://www.wattpad.com/392504609-psychosis-chapter-4
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Gore Level: Blood and Gore includes mutilation of body parts.
Summary: This book is in first person and follows Dr. Stacy Lowett as she takes on a case in dealing with a young woman with severe psychosis. The scene in Chapter 4 is where Dr. Lowett finds out about her patient, Teresa Carmichael, and the happenings inside the EPPI (Everlasting Peace Psychiatric Institute).
Author's Note: Hey, everyone. Please keep in mind this is a first draft (with very light editing). The story is quite slow paced compared to most Wattpad books, but it may interest users in terms of tension and development, especially twists. I'm looking to improve and expand on this story, too, so any suggestions for improvement are welcome :)
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