@KabyHsu
[Summary]
• Your summary seemed to be lacking a bit for me as a royalty fanfiction I'd aspect an more in-depth summary. By reading the summary I wouldn't feel the urge to read it and that's sad because it's a really good story.
🕊 18/30
[Plot]
• I really appreciate this plot because it's so different. I enjoy the royal and magical aspects and the descriptive elements you used in some parts. I do feel that figurative language could have been more implied to bring it up a notch but what you've done is okay.
🕊 30/30
[Format+Grammar]
• You didn't have any noticeable grammar mistakes, therefore, I have nothing to critique. Everything was fluid and easy to read good job!
🕊 30/30
[Cover]
• For a royal fic, I expected the cover to be crazy detailed. This was a bit plain and disappointing.
🕊 5/10
[Others]
• Overall your story was really unique. I enjoyed how easy it was to read and it didn't feel forced. I also loved how you portrayed the love triangle between the three. The epilogue was sweet and left things up to the reader. Amazing job.
Overall: 8.3/10
Thank-you 🕊 I recommend reading this 🕊
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