@GabbySLee
[Summary]
I loved the summary it was very brief and simple but described the story pretty well.
🕊30/30
[Plot]
I can't directly define the plot in the story so far. More so each chapter is Namjoon trying to discover more about Jungmi. It seems like a really slow burn so far and ready for more action.
Namjoon
I appreciate the way you describe his character, I love the fact that he understands a lot of things but what he truly wants to understand and figure out is her. I love how you allow the reader to understand the way he thinks and how he analyzes certain things.
I truly see no problem with Namjoon's Character so far.
Jungmi
I like Jungmi's character from the bit that you revealed about her. She sees things differently and in a creative state. Rather than Namjoon who probably sees things more so in a logical state.
It's interesting how she challenges him already. Teaching him new things and different ways of interpretation.I hope to see their characters develop and grow throughout this book.
🕊 25/30
[Format+Grammar]
• I found nothing wrong with your format and grammar. Very easy read!
🕊 30/30
[Cover]
•There's nothing wrong with your cover. It fits the theme of the old libraries and coffee shops!
🕊10/10
[Others]
• This book was an interesting read with a common/cliche approach but with your own twist. You are a very creative writer and the descriptive elements that you use to describe Namjoon are amazing.
Overall: 9.5/10
🕊Thank you🕊
I recommend reading this
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