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by glossyseokjin

by glossyseokjin

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[Summary]

•Your summary was simple and to the point. It was intriguing and gives just enough insight into the book. Your Title fits the theme perfectly.

🕊30/30

[Plot]

•With only two chapters in first and foremost, I would like to say I am already interested. You introduce us to your first main character in a good way.

- Mina and Taehyung

• So far Mina seems to have her stuff together she's successful in her job and rich. Calm and collected now but I'm predicting that will change.

• Taehyung we are introduced to in the second chapter he's sly and cunning and seems to be a challenge to Mina.

• I can't wait for development in both characters and how this relationship will arise.

🕊 28/30

[Format+Grammar]

• Your diction was done well and most of your grammar was fine but be sure to separate paragraphs when another character starts a dialogue. It gets confusing if they're apart of the same paragraph.

Ex: "Hey," she said

"Hello" I responded

🕊 20/30

[Cover]

•Your cover is okay, could be a bit better.

🕊 8/10

[Others]

• Overall your book is going to a good start keep up the good work!

Overall: 8.6/10

Thank you for requesting! 🕊 I recommend this story so far🕊