Edit/Redo

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Hey, readers! I'm thinking about either redoing this story with a slightly different plot or just editing this story. There's so many mistakes on here and not to mention, there are parts of the story that doesn't make sense. Like the first chapter, for example, when Matrix had an asthma attack and Jack told Ratchet her name not to mention when she introduced herself to Jack and the bots.

What do you guys think? (Please comment on your vote)

Edit the book!

Redo the book and make it longer!

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