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I felt a burst of inspiration come through me in the last couple of hours to write a poem
ALL HATE WILL BE IGNORED
This my first actual poem I've ever done so plz don't hate :D
I would love to hear feedback from you guys :D

A short poem I wrote
1/27/15
By pastelli

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That turns that frown around

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That makes you put down that knife

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That helps you win this fight

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That helps you with all my might

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That tells you everything is gonna be alright

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That helps you see the light

When you're on the ground
And your universe crashed down
Can I be that angel
That saves your life

Er... Idk if I like it
This has a lot of thought put in to it so plz dont hate
The person that this is for has Wattpad and reads this book xD
I bet you know that this is about you ________
Stay strong __________ :)
Plz.....
bye lovelies, darlings, and beautifuls :)

(plz comment if u like it or not or if I should do more of these "poem things")

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