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▍❯ Throne Of Dragonix

Reviewer: frost_1543
Author: Baqkns

Book Title: Throne Of Dragonix

Cover: 4/5
The cover is really pretty, but if you add a little bit of blue around the flames I think it will look more amazing and give out more of a fantasy vibe. Just my opinion, but the cover is amazing.

Title: 5/5
The title is unique and to the point. It also sounds very majestic.

Description: 3/5
I felt like the description was pretty hard to grasp, the one who read the story will be able to tell what the description means, but the people who only read the description won't be willing to go into the book and check it out. The description does not do good to the story, it puts the book down. So if you can improve it a little, you will gain more readers.

Grammar/Vocabulary: 15/15
Your grammar and vocabulary are on point and perfect. People whose first language is not English will have a bit of difficulty reading, but using such complex words gives a majestic vibe to the book and since it is a fantasy book these types of words are definitely needed. Amazing job on that.

Use of literary techniques: 10/10
This also is perfect. It helps readers go along with the flow of the book. No trouble here.

Character Development: 12/15
The book does not start with the protagonist pov. So it throws the reader off on who is actually the protagonist. People who read the book will think that Ignia is the protagonist. They will also be confused because Ignia is not mentioned in the description. It only says that a rebellion rises. Also, people will think that the story is about Ignia and Lian trying to save each other from going down the wrong path. So if you can clear that out, it would be amazing.

Emotions Evoked: 9/10
The book focuses on emotions such as friendship, rage, sadness. It focuses on sadness after losing a loved one, also trying to save a friendship.

Writing style: 9/10
The book explains a lot of minor details, to make it more imaginable, but some lazy readers will totally skip that part and only focus on the conversation. So try to keep that to a minimum.

Plot+Originality: 15/15
I have never seen a plot as interesting and amazing as yours. I was totally amazed at your work. I feel like people who are willing to start fantasy should start by reading your book. Amazing work.

General satisfaction: 9/10
I felt like the chapters are quite long and the flow is disturbed in some areas. Some readers won't even bother reading if the chapters are very long. But, I enjoyed the book. I read from the prologue to chapter 5 and it was amazing. The prologue itself is very intriguing and makes you read more.

Total marks: 91/100

I would definitely recommend reading this book because it is amazing and totally had me hooked and I am also not a huge fan of fantasy, but it made me want to read and finish the whole book. Amazing work. Keep writing. All the best. I hope your book receives the recognition it deserves.   

-Thank you