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Finding love abroad

Book Title: Finding love abroad
Author: @frost_
Reviewer: @feliciarutendo

Cover: 4/5

I love the book cover. I feel like it relates to the book title in that the girl on the swing seems as if she's day dreaming longing for something well a person can interpret it the way that they want lol. However, I would suggest change the font color and text of the editor name I'm finding it hard to read.

Title: 4/5

I love that the book title is simple yet can draw a person in as the person will have an idea of what the book will be about. Though the book title does give away the whole plot but then a reader may want to find out who's falling in love and who the person is falling in love with and how they'll fall in love.

Summary: 3/5

I'll have to admit that I was a bit disappointed with the summary. This is because the summary is a bit bland and gives a cliché vibe which most readers want to avoid so I would suggest editing the summary a bit to draw in the readers.

Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15

I love the consistency in tense meaning that you're not jumping from past to present tense and this made it more enjoyable to read as it was not confusing. The book with its flow shows that the author took some time in reading and editing. I can tell that you were very careful with the words in that you used simple vocabulary and avoided the more complicated ones. Besides that I love the flow.

Use of literary techniques: 2/10

As I mentioned above you were very careful with the vocabulary and you used simple vocabulary. Also meaning that your use of literary techniques was quite low. In spite of the fact that it makes it easier to read it also makes it a little bland. I would suggest a little editing and adding a bit more spice.

Character development: 10/15

Well I have to admit that character development was there but to a lesser extent. We got to see each character and how they're like through they're actions, how they speak and the clothes that they were. However, I would have loved to see them grow. Maybe it's in the later chapters but I'll continue to see in the later chapters.

Emotions Evoked: 13/15

The right emotions were triggered depending with the situation. I got to go aww this is really sweet especially the relationship with the brother to a point of aww this is sad. I also found the caring family's actions kind and tender and I also got upset. But I would suggest a little more editing.
Writing Style: 6/10

I love the simple writing as it makes it easy to read and it generally just flows. It also doesn't make the writer frustrated as they won't be picking the dictionary every now and then. But then I'd suggest upping the writing style so that the reader doesn't find it too plain.

Plot/Originality: 8/10

I have to admit that I haven't come across a story line that is similar to yours. So I'll you that for originality.
Push Factor: 7/10

At some instances in the book I felt like I could read more and more then at others it felt like it had come to a standstill. So a little tweaking can really make it a push factor in the reading sector.
Total Score: 71/
Review Note:

I enjoyed reading the book as I found the storyline quite refreshing sand I really can't wait to read more. However, as I mentioned earlier what also makes a book worth reading is how the book is written as much as we can say that simple words are best which they are of course there should also be added spice just one or two. Besides that I enjoyed reading. Would recommend this book.