Reviewer: frost_1543
Author: CuteCookie1_
Book Title: Byburn's Human
Cover: 5/5
The cover is amazing.
Title: 5/5
The title is good too.
Description: 3/5
The description needs a little bit of work. Maybe try adding a catchy blurb. This description won't attract much readers.
Grammar/Vocabulary: 13/15
Your grammar needs some improvement. You also missed some commas. Do edit that
Use of literary techniques: 9/10
No problem here.
Character Development: 14/15
The character development is fine. Even though she is in a new world, she tries not to be a burden and that is very admirable. Since the book is only six chapters in, I can't tell much.
Emotions Evoked: 9/10
It was very sad to read that part when she realized she might never go back home.
Writing style: 7/10
Your writing style is fine. The pacing of the story is a bit fast. I feel like the book lacked enough information.
Plot+Originality: 14/15
The plot is really good. I was really curious about how she is going to survive in this new world. The part where they wanted her as soon as she entered the world really showed how much of a dangerous situation she is in and it was really thrilling.
General satisfaction: 8/10
The book kept me a the edge of my seat and I wanted to read more and more. But since the book is only six chapters in, there is not much you can tell about the book.
Total marks: 87/100
I would definitely recommend reading this book because it is amazing and made me want to read more and more. Amazing work. Keep writing. All the best. I hope your book receives the recognition it deserves.
- Thank you
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