Reviewer: frost_1543
Author: devilsstepfather
Book Title: What Happened At The Lake
Cover: 5/5
The cover is amazing and very unique
Title: 5/5
The title is exactly what the story is about.
Description: 4/5
The description is good. I don't see any problem here. Maybe if you could keep a catchy blurb, you can attract more readers.
Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/15
Your grammar needs a lot of work. Some sentences don't make sense. Also full stop and commas are missing in a lot of places. The names should always be in Capital. The sentences are also too long with no full stop in between that makes it hard to understand. Since it is a book, you can't write like you text. Its though and no tho. Always start a sentence with capital letter.
Use of literary techniques: 8/10
Your writing needs a lot of work, make sure you edit that.
Character Development: 13/15
Even though all those weird things happen in Beera's life, she understands the situation and takes the necessary measures to.
Emotions Evoked: 9/10
Every chapter ends in such a way that you can't help but be curious about what is going to happen next. You are always at the edge of the seat wondering what is going to happen next.
Writing style: 8/10
The writing style is not bad. The chapters always leave you wanting to read more. It is written in that way.
Plot+Originality: 14/15
The plot is great and very unique, you can't judge the book with only the title, because so many things happen after she encounters that lake. It is amazing to see how the author made the chapters very unique.
General satisfaction: 9/10
The book is really good. It is not your typical horror story. If you want a story that leaves you at the edge of the seat and a plot that is very unique, you should give this book a try.
Total marks: 85/100
I would definitely recommend reading this book because it is amazing and made me want to read more. Can't wait too see what is going to happen next. Amazing work. Keep writing. All the best. I hope your book receives the recognition it deserves.
-Thank you.
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