Reviewer: frost_1543
Author: iloveharry_2
Book Title: Unforgettable
Cover: 3/5
The cover is very pretty. Since it is a fan fiction, it is the norm to keep the picture of your idol. But the in the story Harry is a bad boy with an intimidating aura, so I think it will be best if you keep of picture of him, where he looks intimidating and like a bad boy.
Title: 5/5
The title is remarkable and catchy.
Description: 4/5
The description is fine, but it does not have the element that would instantly make a readers want to read the book. Think of a catchy blurb or a more unique way to explain your book
Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15
Your grammar and vocabulary is good. No mistakes here. But it is simple and very plain. You can add more unique and sophisticated words.
Use of literary techniques: 9/10
No problem here too.
Character Development: 13/15
I can't really tell much about the character development since the book is only three chapters in. But as far as I can tell, I feel like both the protagonists will have a huge character development as the story progresses.
Emotions Evoked: 9/10
The emotions I felt is kind of mixed, and I can relate to it very well too. Joining the university to do your dream course, but the anxiety suddenly kicks in making you doubt you while existence. It is all too relatable.
Writing style: 8/10
The writing style is good. Again, since the book is only three chapters in, I can't really tell.
Plot+Originality: 13/15
It is your typical girl gets matched with the bad boy for a project, they start off hating each other, but find comfort in each other. You have to progresses your book in such a way that, the people who read it will say that it is not a typical enemies to lovers book. Include many twists and turns. No one should be able to tell what is going to happen next.
General satisfaction: 8/10
The book is good. I read the chapters and it made me want to read more stay till the end of the book. The chapters ate not lengthy and to the point, that will make even the lazy readers stay and read your book.
Total marks: 86/100
I would definitely recommend reading this book because it is amazing and had me hooked, making me want to read more. Amazing work. Keep writing. All the best. I hope your book receives the recognition it deserves. Thank you
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