We Need To Talk

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Finally back on Wattpad after ANOTHER good long break. Everything should be fine and dandy still ri-

 Everything should be fine and dandy still ri-

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Um... I'm sure the bug isn't a global issue. I'm pretty it'll get fixed and it probably isn't at least in my books.

 I'm pretty it'll get fixed and it probably isn't at least in my books

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No..

No God please no

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No God please no.

No God please no

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NO

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NO

NO

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NOOOOOO

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NOOOOOO

Hello. It's been a bit. How long? I have no fucking idea. I still have the sleep schedule of Batman. The mentality of Joker and will power of a dead corpse. But besides that I've been working on stuff on the side and I've haven't put a lot of effort into this book—reason being. Not going to lie I hate it. Before anyone loses their shit. Not like HATE it. I just mean it is poorly written and has a lot. A LOT of potential plot holes. Some of my characters have lost chances to grow and don't have correct personalities. Also, the number one thing stabbing my relationship with this book is the reader's relationship with Anna. It happened too fast. They should've had more trust built between them and a lot more struggles. Do you know the best part of this book? Laurie. Laurie is the best part. She's sassy; she's over it, beyond the point of caring if she's things between the damn Demogorgon or Myers back from the dead like it's FNAF 78 with William Afton as a skeleton. Dwight should be a leader. Meg is kind of a dick still. Claudette is fine, I guess, but Jake should be more laid back. Nea could be a bit better. For some reason, it gives the reader more personality than the guy in the SPLIT movie. Anna isn't that oblivious and, most importantly, doesn't talk like she's Russian. Also, the Entity doesn't speak... Ever. What am I going to do? I don't know. I've been working on a COMPLETE. Overhaul on the side but do I like it? I don't know. I just really wish personally I was a bit more patient with this book when I first started this book. I still love DBD but this could've used a lot more work. But, I'm sorry those who have very VERY patiently waited for this book and maybe my others. I've just been watching Arcane over and over and that really made me VIBE check myself when it came to my stories. Arcane just KO'd me like uppercut from Little Mac and a choke-slam by Nemesis.

P.S.:Fuck Trickster.

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