Arknights : Final Rebirth - Gladius Belii

NOTICE: Announcement Logs, and yes I reused the Announcement because why not?

Version 2.0 [DONE]

I finally have the time to start fixing my older chapters' grammar and stuff. It will take a while of course.

Useful marks to understand what happened to a chapter:

[E] for Edited: This means that this chapter has only been edited and not much change happened to the story Chronology.

[U] for Updated: This one will mark a chapter that will have some changes for some parts of within it. 

[R] for Rewrite: This is a chapter that undergoes a complete overhaul. 

Of course, a complete Arc overhaul will have its own announcement added here like the Version 1.0 Newly edited Chapter will be titled like this "[E] / [U] / [R] Chapter X - Bla bla bla."

Version 1.0 [DONE]

Sorry for the inconvenience, but I have decided to starts rewriting a small portion of chapter 13 and the entire Victorian Academy Arc.

There are several reasons, namely:

I had overestimated myself.

Nyx doesn't really mesh in well with Academy life, she would work better as a temporary instructor. 

She is good enough as a chess piece, as she was always intended to be in the future.

She had gotten entangled by too many things without sufficient footing, which should have warranted her too many problem too handle.

Several Arknights lore interpretation that had gone way too much off.

Not enough build up for the major event there, specifically the "Walk in the Dust" event.

Realistically, even though Nyx is too much of an unknown, the nobles should have been more aggressive in their approach on political chessboard.

The interactions between characters are way too forceful, to the point that I pulled over characters that shouldn't have been in Victoria.

Since I realized this many problems, you may give me an input on how to make things better and more manageable lest I made the same or even worse blunder.