Chapter 2: Brothers stick together, keep your tail out of trouble!

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A/N: Espeon804 here with another great chapter! School is trying to kill me already. I have been in school this year for 2 weeks now and already they are me with math homework and SAT prep stuff. You guys know that I am trying to get mainly A's and B's so studying is my goal... as much as I hate it. Updating will happen less often but you must be wondering how I am able to update quicker than usual. I can update 1 chapter every two weeks if I am just working in this fanfiction. I have my own phone now so I can go on Google docs and work on them there whenever I am done with school work. I type during free time in class and during my lunch period so I can get things done too.

Odd fact: So yeah, some of you know that I am a 16- year-old girl in the 11th grade. I love Pokemon and Dragon Ball. I hate it when I read fanfictions and people mess up the characters so bad. To be completely honest, I don't even swear. I am not a fan of violence though I can handle blood, not gore.

Random guy: So if you don't cuss and don't like violence, explain why you are writing this fanfiction!

Well, I asked myself the same question. It's Dragon Ball. It can't be a Dragon Ball fanfiction without violence and well, cursing in some places. Staying in character is what is important and we know that Vegeta would use every word in the book... Well, that's the Japanese dub. I don't cuss at all. My friends are so eager to hear me say one curse word. Notice how my Author Notes don't have any cursing in them.

Here's the thing. When I write my fanfics my mind is so into the plots I focused well into what I am typing so sometimes I am unaware of what I did until I read it myself. Then a think "Wow. Did I really type that?" Like the previous chapter when Goku punches clean through Recoome's chest. I was like "Wow." But not shocked. Gut punches are very common in Dragon Ball anyway.

I do this for the readers. Think about it. If this was all kid friendly and too nice,nobody would be reading this! Heck, I watch "Inuyasha" and that show has more blood than Dragon Ball! Doesn't bother me. I should test myself by watching "Attack on Titan."

I am pointing that out because there is a lot of language in this chapter because there will be a lot going on!

Well, enough of that. Let's go on. Urgh. I hate typing disclaimers but it must be done.

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN DB, DBZ, DBGT, DBZKAI, OR DBS! All rights go to Akira Toriyama, Funimation, Toei Animation, and however else is involved.

If I do own it, Goku will have some kind of way to have his tail back! They should really do that in the future episodes of "Dragon Ball Super". It would be cool. Vegeta should have been able to grow his back. I wonder why not yet?

Key:

"Talking"

"Speaking another language/ Thoughts"

'Telepathy'

- Chapter 2: Brothers stick together, keep your tail out of trouble! -

Last time on "The retaliation of the Earthling Saiyan":

"Wow. Aren't you a tough one! After all that and you are still willing to fight me huh? You know, I've heard that your father is the same way. I guess they grow up stubborn on your world huh?" He laughs and shouts; "I should know! I am stubborn too!"

"You mock me and my father for the last time!" Raditz begins to run for him, ignoring every painful step as he gets closer. He growls loudly as he springs at Recoome and thrust his fist forward only to have his attempted punch to be dodged. Recoome has jumped over him and he is still going through from under, passing by between his legs.

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