Chapter 23

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Raven Canyne

I feel like something's not right. I've been feeling like this halfway throughout the way to the hospital.

I'm not sure what it is but this feeling just won't suffice.

I shouldn't worry since its just a gut feeling but I don't know, something definitely ain't right.

"You okay? You look constipated." Zeth said.

"I'm fine, just a bit nervous I guess. You know with the whole being able to see again." I said.

Yeah, that's right. I'm just nervous. I just need a distraction to get this feeling off my chest.

"Hey Zeth, tell me. What does Onyx look like to you?" I asked.

This may be a good distraction. I also want to know what Onyx looks like in another person's point of view.

"Seriously? You could have asked any question and you chose that?"

He linked with a sarcastic tone.

"Yup, I just want to know before I actually get a good look at him."

I think he sighed. I felt him take in a deep breath then breathed out.

"Fine. But know this, I am a guy and I don't particularly know how to describe other guys or explain their facial features or what ever. So I'll just tell you what I saw. Got it?" He linked.

"Uh-huh." I answered.

"Alright, based on what I saw he is a "bit" good looking, I look better." He linked and I couldn't help but roll my eyes inwardly.

A bit conceited there bro.

"He has black eyes like his name suggests. A straight knows a bit like mine. He's got jet black hair much like yours. Don't ask about lips because I'm not describing them, I'll just say their a bit pink."

Aww, and I wanted to know about the lips of the man I kiss.

"What else am I supposed to describe? Let's see, he's taller than me by about a few centimeters. He's got a good build but again, mine is better."

Ang again, I rolled my eyes.

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I am so very sorry. I have failed my readers. This may be the final update.

I know, its incomplete so forgive me.

I lost the draft for this story and my mind went blank with ideas to put. Well even if i continue to write it, it would be half assed so i beg for my readers forgiveness.

I disappointed some of you but do not fret. I'll be putting up a better story that will surely have a proper ending.

I'll consider this story one of my failed attempts.

Again, i'm really very sorry!

--naira

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