Cliche #17

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They fall in love at first sight.

EXAMPLE: "I saw him. He saw me. We fell in love. Even if it was just five minutes ago."

WHY THIS IS ANNOYING: You know the drill. Girl sees boy. Boy sees girl. Their eyes meet. BAM. Instant, undying passion, and devotion. They would die to be together! Even though they've only known each other for like 5 minutes. Or one song. (I'm looking at you, Marius & Cosette).

HOW TO FIX THIS: GIVE IT SOME TIME! Wait a little bit till your characters fall in love. Make sure they have a relationship and become good friends but you can do something like  Make she they for all I care. Just relationship first crush second love third. 

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