Then everything turned black...
Example: He hit me in the face. Hard. I feel on the concrete and everything turned black.
Why This Is Annoying: OH LOOK, another cliche that is used all the time. What a small world! And I still can't run into Beyonce -.- I mean. I guess it is hard to be de Queen B.
How To Fix This: You can use words better than this. For example, "I fell to the ground. I felt dizzy as the room filled with darkness." How hard is it to make one freaking sentence? Y'all need to be creative. No more of this "I'm too lazy to even make a paragraph" nonsense. Or "I want my book to be original." That is how cliches are made. If you DIDN'T KNOW
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100 book cliches {Completed}
Slumpmässig kategoriHIGHEST RATING: #6 IN RANDOM WARNING: THERE ARE SWEARING MATURE THEMES AND TRIGGERING SUBJECTS Welcome to the Cliche Manual. I will explain to y'all the most known cliches and explain how to fix them, therefore, making your book more pleasant to re...
