Cliche #49

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Why are the songs so long?

Example: 

I found a love for me
Darling just dive right in
And follow my lead
Well I found a girl beautiful and sweet
I never knew you were the someone waiting for me
'Cause we were just kids when we fell in love


Not knowing what it was
I will not give you up this time
But darling, just kiss me slow, your heart is all I own
And in your eyes you're holding mine


Baby, I'm dancing in the dark with you between my arms
Barefoot on the grass, listening to our favorite song
When you said you looked a mess, I whispered underneath my breath
But you heard it, darling, you look perfect tonight


Well I found a woman, stronger than anyone I know
She shares my dreams, I hope that someday I'll share her home
I found a love, to carry more than just my secrets
To carry love, to carry children of our own


We are still kids, but we're so in love
Fighting against all odds
I know we'll be alright this time
Darling, just hold my hand
Be my girl, I'll be your man
I see my future in your eyes


Baby, I'm dancing in the dark, with you between my arms
Barefoot on the grass, listening to our favorite song
When I saw you in that dress, looking so beautiful
I don't deserve this, darling, you look perfect tonight


Baby, I'm dancing in the dark, with you between my arms
Barefoot on the grass, listening to our favorite song
I have faith in what I see
Now I know I have met an angel in person
And she looks perfect
I don't deserve thisYou look perfect tonight


Why This Is Annoying: You didn't read the song, did you?

I'm also screaming I love that song akdalkskd.

How To fix This: You can add a few parts of the song for example:

I put my headphones in and my favorite song "Perfect" came on. 

Or add a few lyrics. Not the whole song. And if you are doing the whole song have some book action. Like:

Baby, I'm dancing in the dark, with you between my arms

I glanced at Chance who was smiling at me. I gave a slight smile and sang the next verse.

Barefoot on the grass, listening to our favorite song
I have faith in what I see

It up to you but just don't make the whole chapter about the song. Add some crush moments or whatever.

Deciated to   JaneConquestBackup 

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