Cliche #54

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Why are the characters so... vain?

Example: I shot another enemy agent in the chest. Someone grabbed me from behind. "ANGIE, HELP!" I yelled. I took a glance at my coworker. "Do these jeans make me look fat?" I rolled my eyes. "HELP!" "Ew, no. I'll chip a nail," she whispered.  The guy looked at me.  "Dude, I feel so bad for you."

Why This Is Annoying: 

Why This Is Annoying: 

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How To fix This:

Me to the authors honestly:

Okay in like all the stories I read there is that one character

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Okay in like all the stories I read there is that one character. The one who always thinks it about them etc. I know people like that but why do we need them in the story? Unless if it is really important that you MUST have a vain character then I will allow it. If not then please think of other ideas.

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