Where did all the human things go?
Example: "You don't eat?" "No." "Pee?" "Nada." "SLEEP?!" "What is sleep?"
Why This Is Annoying: Honestly people are paying more attention to the example than to the rest of the chapter. IT IS AN EXAMPLE! IM NOT TELLING YOU THAT PEOPLE NEED TO TALK ABOUT THE PEE PEE EXPERIENCE. IF ITS IMPORTANT TO THE STORY THEN PUT THE PEE PEE EXPERIENCE IN THE STORY.
How To Fix This: I'm not saying you need to add the Pee Pee experience I'm saying you need to make it more human-like. Make them sit down and eat while looking at their phone. Let them sleep. Let them be like humans and not like robots who don't need the human experience.
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