Before I officially begin proper planning of It's About Time, I need to know what you guys liked most about the original story and/or what I could have improved on.
Below, I'll list some elements of the original Plants vs. Zombies story. I'd love for you to leave an in-line comment on each and honestly tell me whether you liked what I did, whether it needed improved, or if it was just okay.
And don't say "it was all good" and nothing else because that doesn't help. If you honestly thought it was all good, then explain what made each part good.
Same with everything else. Didn't like it or thought it was okay? Tell me why you think that way. I won't be angry if you found some parts bad or okay. I'm just looking for honesty.
The original characters (Alex, Freddy, Josie, Minion)
My version of Crazy Dave
My version of Dr. Zomboss
The adaptation of the levels
The side-story of Josie x Alex
The sci-fi vibe with the plant technology
Putting most of the focus on the humans
The Plants' personalities
Overall character development
Humor
Drama
Thanks in advance, guys! The feedback I get will help a lot in the planning of It's About Time, so please be as honest as possible!
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Plants vs. Zombies
FanfictionBOOK 1 OF 2 After a year of brain-eating zombies roaming the earth and bringing humanity to an endangerment, three teenagers, Alex, Josie, and Freddy, discover they're not alone in their suburban Californian town. In the midst of the neighborhood li...
