I enjoy writing this story, but it feels a little too rushed, too forced. Should I go ahead and rewrite all the chapters.. or just keep posting like normal?
Also, can I have some suggestions for the story, and how I can improve it? I have ideas, but they're mainly for after the main story. I want to make the story least rushed, and feel less forced.
I tried getting someone to help me, and they agreed, but then they later changed their mind. So, if anyone could offer some help on improving the story, I'd really appreciate it.
*Sorry for another Author's note...*
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Just a Machine(Connor X OC)
FanfictionIn this current generation Androids are the top selling things in the market. They are basically slaves, and many become Deviants due to a assumed virus in their programming. Beth Anderson, works with her father Hank Anderson on cases, and frequentl...
