𝙰𝚏𝚏𝚊𝚒𝚛 𝚆𝚒𝚝𝚑 𝚖𝚢 𝚂𝚝𝚎𝚙-𝚋𝚛𝚘𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚜(𝑀𝐴𝐾𝑁𝐴𝐸𝐿𝐼𝑁𝐸 21+) ✅

Just My Opinion

I don't know why people still like reading this rubbish story of mine but thank you for the positive comments you guys are leaving!

Even though my english isn't as perfect as I think it is, I will still try my best to study it. Thank you everyone for bearing with me.

The more I read my story the more I started to feel... Cringy? Is that how you describe it? I just felt like this story isn't really that complete like as if you are watching a movie but instead of watching the full movie you skip the middle part and go to the end immediately.

Also, you could really see this type of story anywhere so there isn't much or originality, I want to make my own story with my own idea but I'm just too lazy to do it.

I don't know.. Just my opinion. Feel free to tell me your opinion as well guys would really like someone bashing me rn so that I know what I can work on, what problem I need to fix in order for me to improve my writing skills.