So we all know the Star Wars prequels could have been so much better. Well I decided I could write a better love story than George Lucas did, and this is my attempt at it. Here you'll see I've only focused on scenes between Anakin and Padmé, and a f...
Here I took away more of that overbearing Obi-Wan banter and turned it down to a reasonable level. I also took out Anakin's cringey thing about "being with Padmé is intoxicating" lol what a psycho. I basically reworked the whole thing. __________________________
OBI-WAN enters PADMÉ'S apartment where ANAKIN is guarding outside her bedroom.
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OBI-WAN Any activity up here?
ANAKIN Not at all.
OBI-WAN checks a palm-sized view scanner laying on a table, all he sees is black.
OBI-WAN What's going on? Why can't I see her?
ANAKIN shrugs. She must have covered the camera. I don't think she liked being watched. I wouldn't like it either, but—
OBI-WAN What is she thinking?
ANAKIN It's alright, she programmed R2 to warn us of any intrusion. We want to catch this assassin, don't we?
OBI-WAN Yes, but it sounds like you're using her as bait.
ANAKIN Not exactly, and this was her idea anyway. There shouldn't be any trouble, I can sense everything going on in that room.
OBI-WAN Your senses aren't that attuned, young apprentice.
ANAKIN I was doing just fine while you were away. Trust me.
OBI-WAN If you insist.
ANAKIN turns to him. You can't always be over my shoulder, master. I'm much older now. I've always been able to sense certain things.
OBI-WAN That may be so, but just because you are older does not compensate for your late training. You still have much to learn.
ANAKIN annoyed. But I feel like you've taught me enough, I learned very fast and you can't deny that.
OBI-WAN I've already explained the dangers of your situation, patience is something you lack immensely.
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