So we all know the Star Wars prequels could have been so much better. Well I decided I could write a better love story than George Lucas did, and this is my attempt at it. Here you'll see I've only focused on scenes between Anakin and Padmé, and a f...
This is where more weird shit starts. Padmé acts like a bitchy babysitter to Anakin who's being a brat about Obi-Wan and he looks at her in a way that makes her "uncomfortable". We can't start off a love story with awkward chemistry. Total reworking done here; I make Anakin talk more about how he feels ahead of everyone, I make Padmé concerned/interested with what he has to say. Duh. __________________________
PADMÉ and ANAKIN are in her apartment bedroom. After the second attempt on her life last night, they were assigned a new plan for protection; to go to NABOO in secret, with ANAKIN as her protector. She is disappointed about the plan, it means she cannot be present for the vote, which makes her scared that the senate will allow this war to happen. But she's also nervous because it means being alone with ANAKIN.
It's been such a long time, and to suddenly have him standing in front of her like that, all grown up, out of the blue? She wondered how she was even able to sleep last night, so anxious from thinking about him. And she surely didn't get any sleep after the way he saved her life. She finishes speaking with CAPTAIN TYPHO, and he exits the room. She turns to ANAKIN, nervously making eye contact, then begins to pack her bags.
PADMÉ trying to break the silence. I despise this idea of hiding.
اوووه! هذه الصورة لا تتبع إرشادات المحتوى الخاصة بنا. لمتابعة النشر، يرجى إزالتها أو تحميل صورة أخرى.
ANAKIN sits on the edge of her bed as she scurries around. Don't worry, now that the council has ordered an investigation, it won't take long to find this bounty hunter.
PADMÉ frustrated. But I haven't worked for a year to defeat the Military Creation Act to not be here when its fate is decided. This is beneath my position.
ANAKIN Sometimes we have to let go of our pride and do what is requested of us.
اوووه! هذه الصورة لا تتبع إرشادات المحتوى الخاصة بنا. لمتابعة النشر، يرجى إزالتها أو تحميل صورة أخرى.
PADMÉ scoffs, smiles. Anakin Skywalker, are you insinuating that I'm being proud?
ANAKIN laughs. No more than I am. Or at least that's how Obi-Wan manages to view myself.
PADMÉ sighs. Mentors do have a way of seeing more of our faults than we would like. It's the only way we learn, I guess.
ANAKIN gets up, and walks to the window. He winces with regret as he stares at the left side of her window, completely broken from when he jumped through it last night. It probably wasn't his best idea.
