Author - Author4life
Story - Life behind closed doors.
Review - Well, to start off with, the cover is pretty good. The story line is really good. I like it. The way you describe the emotions of your characters is pretty good too. The major setback to your book is your grammar. Though I won't say that it is really bad, it is bad. Sorry for putting it that way. Improve your grammar, and, you'll get excellent feedback for your book. I suggest you read more books, that have good words. Try, pride and prejudice, or any of the so many classic novels. Their grammar is something else really.
Thank you for applying, though!
Have a good day!
Reviewer - hinata_ricci
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