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It All Began With A Simple Date..

Author: Hi! @vampire_angelz *waves*

Book: It all began with a simple date...

Reviewer: @-stereoheart- ~ A.K

Review:
I rarely read these kinda' books but your title really attracted me.
The story line is amazing.It is unique that's what I loved about it! Making the cover more attractive will do wonders.

Notes:
1. Your summary is quite wordy and really couldn't understand the plot by your summary,but when I read the story I liked the plot alot.If you ask me you should cut it short and also try to introduce the protagonists in the summary.

2. There were some minor errors like -
  a) Chapter 1 : "...shining ray of light..." it should be ray of light 'cause shining is not going apt with ray of light.
  b) Chapter 2 : "...own offspring made of her own blood". It should be made up.
  c) Also some capitalisation errors. Don't worry everyone does that, just fix 'em ASAP

3. The way you introduced the main lead in the grocery shop is awesome!

4. The cover is quite a simple it can be made more catchy.

Rest all is well. Loved your style and end was fab. Waiting for the sequel.A bit of improvement and you'll rock the show.
Good luck
*high-five*