Affliction

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Author - AlisaJades

Upshot - What you wrote there is the apt description of an upshot. It's short and descriptive. That's what a summary should look like. It's great.
Rating - 5/5.

Cover - Though the cover is a bit on the routine side, it's apt for the storyline. It's lovely.
Rating - 4/5.

Storyline - I love your innovative storyline. It's really good. It was an interesting read. I loved the part where the prince meets the lady in the library and mistakes her for a servant.
Rating - 4.5/5.

Grammar - Though your grammar is meticulous and fit for a historical fiction story, your tenses are a bit off. A little bit of editing would do the job.
Rating - 3.5/5.

I would like to say that, your story is bound to end up in my reading list. I loved every bit of it. I would be glad if you'd as nice as to update the next chapter as fast as possible. Thank you, for the experience.

Good day to you,
Snigdha.
(hinata_ricci)

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