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Author - @CrystalleAura

Let's start off with the ratings...

Title - The title of your story is interesting and unique. Mystery lovers like me would surely want to check out your book. But it may seem confusing too. So I give 4.5/5

Plot - Your plot is very interesting. I liked it very much. Instead I loved it very much. So I give 4/5

Cover - Your cover very well goes with the story. Everything related to the story is present on the cover. So I give 4.5/5

Let's start discussing about the story now...

Your story was amazing , fab and what should I say... Ya ! Mind Blowing... And why not ? Your story is #16 in mystery and I am very happy about this wattpad's true decision.

I tried to find spelling mistakes but was not able to find one. You have checked all your chapters and I think that it is a good thing. As readers will be more happy.

I think you need to improve where Kayne , Floyd and Cedric were talking. I was confused that who was saying what so you need to do some changes. Chapter length was also good.

It's also good that you explain a character's role 2-3 times as a reader may forget who was this character or what was his role.

Also In His Thoughts was a good thing but 1-2 line does not satisfies the readers. You should add more limes.My favourite part was when Quaron Wright was killed by Mr. Kayne. This was a mind blowing twist.

I will give your story overall rating of 4/5

Good job , Girl !

Reviewer - Passionofwriting

Have a happy writing ahead !