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Broken Until Him

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by Thelovelygirlgroup

by Thelovelygirlgroup

Title : Broken Until Him

Author : @jxstmysxlf

Ratings...

Title - Well...the title is beautiful in itself. Smart readers like me would understand it in a minute but I am not sure about others. 😂😜 Also its confusing. I give 4/5

Plot - The plot was interesting and different from others and as you added cliffhangers, it got more interesting. I give 4/5

Cover - Cover is also good and as you have described the word BROKEN by separating the images and that girl also looked like she was broken as making a sad face. I give 4.5/5

About the story now...

The story was really amazing and fab till now. I liked the way you have written her views in italics at the starting of the chapter. It had became a habit for me to read those inspirational ones. They were so beautiful.

Ahh ! Back to the world now !

Story was actually going good like Nathan gives her so many surprises by behaving to her like that and Jade couldn't even understand. As this happens, readers can always guess that Nathan loves Jade.

I could see spelling mistakes, missing words and grammatical errors. They were seen but very rarely. So check out the mistakes and correct them. Otherwise the story is going good.

Overall story - 4/5

Reviewer - @Passionofwriting

Keep writing !

Byeeee !