Author - Kiara786786
Book - Stranded
Well, to start off with, the cover is appropriate for the story. The tagline is perfect! It's something that makes readers more intrigued about the story. I would give a 4/5 rating for the cover. And, 4.5/5 rating for your tagline.
Moving on to the story, the storyline is really great! I've always wondered about what would happen if people were to be stranded on an island like that. Glad to have read it. I would give a rating of 4/5 for the storyline.
The drawback to your story is, that, though you express emotions well, you don't use the correct words to express them. Correct word usage is a vital asset in expressing emotions. Also, your sentence formations could use a bit of improvement. I would give them a rating of 2.5/5.
Overall, your story is superb, except for the minor drawbacks I mentioned. Thank you for applying, though!
Reviewer - hinata_ricci
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