Reviews [ON HOLD]

My Collection

Title - My Collection

Author - @the_summer_princess

Genre - Random

Quite interesting...

Cover - The cover is good actually but as it is made by navikaur373 who is our group member so no ratings.

Randoms - Wow ! New name by me randoms. So they were good actually. I liked the topics you choosed. I give 4/5

Title - It is actually your own collection so you can obviously say ' My Collection '. Your book is actually having a unique meaning. I give 4/5

Story now... No ! Sorry

Randoms now...

I liked the way you have written poems. Topics were also good but in between in some places the words were not rhyming and I could see that easily so you need to fix that.

Also a very main thing that I would like to say is that your poems started from a topic. Okay. But they went somewhere else in the end. ( Shuru kahin se huyi aur khatam kahin aur se ) So you need to fix that a lot.

If you are writing only poems then change the genre and If you are going to add something then add like quotes, beautiful speeches or lines or a beautiful short story. It will also look good.

Overall randoms - 3.7/5

Reviewer - Passionofwriting

Keep writing !