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The Giant Guy

Title : The Giant Guy

Author : @swethaa_sweet

Genre : Humour

Ratings...

Title - Title very well goes with the story and that you have cut in the cover. My Giant Guy No ! The Giant Guy it looks like Twyla is falling for her but is not falling for her. I give 4.5/5

Plot - Omg ! I still can't stop laughing with the incidents that happened in the story. I must say you are very creative. I give 4/5

Cover - The previous cover was good. This is just OKAY ! Because it is plain just white but previous one was expressed the attitude filled Twyla and The Giant Guy.I give 3/5

About the story now...

It was a pleasure to read your story for me. Filled with fun, humour, pranks and romance. Readers love this kind of romantic-comedy. Your book is #55 in humour coz of your good work.

In the whole book never at a point I felt that the book got boring. It was interesting because of Twyla's attitude, her excitement and her interesting behaviour. It was also a pleasure to see the giant guy and Twyla bang into each other.

At a point I saw that you forgot about the cast. When it was removed ? How she felt like before sleeping watching that and remembering her memories with her first cast. Also you described what a girl will feel after her first k*ss...

Some improvements are to be taken care of like spelling mistakes, grammar errors and most importantly. When I was reading the story I got confused who was thinking what. In between you entered the dialogues which made me confuse so take a note of that.

Otherwise the story was amazing...

Overall rating - 4/5

Reviewer - Passionofwriting

Keep Writing !

Bye...!